For a supposedly last minute fic that you're not quite happy about, this is doing a remarkably good job of impersonating excellence!

I love the humour here - the snark-of-mutual-respect between Draco and Hermione, in particular. Also the more descriptive bits: He turns and leaves, managing to swish both his hair and pyjamas had me giggling madly - and I just glanced at the beginning of the next part and saw the remark about Draco's hair, so I know the trend continues. Now reading on...