I think I have passed fan girl have have become a groupie. Your writing is smooth and realistic. The conversations are fast yet paced with a fluidity that you almost ever find in books. Your characterizations are amazing. You have taken rather flat characters from Rowling and made them full and dynamic.
When Hermione is dealing with a hang over,So many would have had her groan or have said for Harry to be quiet. But Hermione doesn't groan and she was already at work so quiet couldn't be an issue.
Draco cleans, gets a mat, water, and wash cloth for Harry when he is sick. Such detail. No one else ever thinks of things like that but it's what you would want to have if you could. (Often people even forget to use magic at all.)
The mission was so detailed and exciting. It really was a nice balance to the relationship aspects. And once again magic was woven in to the mission in an exectional manner.
I think I have read every thing you have written with Draco. You Draco is by far my favorite. Adult, snarky, and intelligent.
I had no idea that this was an abandoned story. I have to say that I enjoyed it more then a lot of completed works I have read.
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When Hermione is dealing with a hang over,So many would have had her groan or have said for Harry to be quiet. But Hermione doesn't groan and she was already at work so quiet couldn't be an issue.
Draco cleans, gets a mat, water, and wash cloth for Harry when he is sick. Such detail. No one else ever thinks of things like that but it's what you would want to have if you could. (Often people even forget to use magic at all.)
The mission was so detailed and exciting. It really was a nice balance to the relationship aspects. And once again magic was woven in to the mission in an exectional manner.
I think I have read every thing you have written with Draco. You Draco is by far my favorite. Adult, snarky, and intelligent.
I had no idea that this was an abandoned story. I have to say that I enjoyed it more then a lot of completed works I have read.