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blamebrampton) wrote2010-08-05 11:14 pm
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Dear Naomi Novik,
I am still hugely enjoying the Temeraire books, but please, for the love of tiny bunnies, hire an actual editor to proofread your novels! The typos! They burn!
(I was doing well at ignoring them until we reached the Nemean region, which is in Ancient Greece, not New South Wales. It was rightly the Nepean earlier. Betas are for fanfic, Naomi. I'm sure you've earned enough to pay for a good editor by now!)
Must dash, plot twist has just occurred and I only have time for another hundred pages before bed.
Much love,
Brammers
(I was doing well at ignoring them until we reached the Nemean region, which is in Ancient Greece, not New South Wales. It was rightly the Nepean earlier. Betas are for fanfic, Naomi. I'm sure you've earned enough to pay for a good editor by now!)
Must dash, plot twist has just occurred and I only have time for another hundred pages before bed.
Much love,
Brammers
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The wordbuilding is excellent, and the draconic characters are well done, but so far the plot seems to be mostly an excuse to explore the scenary than an exercise in what-will-happen-next. I'd have liked to see more depth in the characterisation in the China scenes, especially
I wonder if part of it is that it's a YA novel where the coming-of-age story belongs to the non-human partner? Whatever it is, I'm not quite relating.
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Which reminds me of yesterday when I groaned at a typo in the major characters' surname in the book I was reading. It's not like the majority of the characters belong to that clan, and their surname is mentioned five times on each page. There is no way to get it right. It actually jolted me out of an interesting plot moment. Tiny bunnies are sad.
Is there a bolshedragon revolution yet?
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...i've got nothing. happy reading the rest? :p
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I guess typos were the least of my problems.
Of course, I have managed (at much earlier times in my life) to read two books in sequence, where in the first a robot character is called Bollux and in the second Zollux (no explanation given, except I think that someone recognised that Bollux may have an interesting connotation in various parts of the world that aren't the US of A), and the two novelisations of the Man from Snowy River movies, where in one his horse is called Dany and in the other Andy. Go figure!
I don't mind not reading more of her Dragon books - but I do wish she'd write more Merlin fic. ;)
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