I read your story and I enjoyed it very much. It was quite well-written and nicely paced- I think you're very talented. I loved that Harry punched Draco but didn't want to do anything else, and that you made this quite romantic without having to go into the gruesome details.

There were only a very few things I would change. One would be the references such as "the blond boy" (Draco) and "the tall man" (Snape) These generic descriptions don't gibe with your POVs- all the characters are quite familiar with each other and wouldn't think of each other in those impersonal terms, which are better to describe characters who are unknown. Harry might see Draco as "his old rival," or "his lover" (for example) not as an anonymous blond.

Also, there is some POV switching between Harry and Draco mid-scene, which is all right but might be cleaner with sticking to a single POV. Just my two cents.