I'm sure you'll get a very satisfactory response to your fic. Does it have a title, by the way?

Empathic Siren pointed out a major scene that needs to be deleted and completely rewritten, so I still have some work to do on my fic and am not sure when I will finish. I will send it to you when done, though. (And that's often why I volunteer to beta- I love reading new stuff by my favorite authors!)

PS- if you're looking for new fics by writers you may not have heard of, my friend (actual) frayach is quite good. Her fics are linked on her user page.