Shmickin frickin present tense ... mutter, mutter ...
Thanks, that's great. Two of the above seem to be problems with the fact that my brain has been eaten by 16th and 19th century English. One of those I meant that way, but if it's stopping you I may need to reconsider punctuation, or italics,
"I can't tell what other people already know other people are thinking half the time.
If I italicise "know", do you think this will convey that Scorpius thinks he's rubbish at reading the people around him?
The other: Lily and Hugo are protesting their lack of harm should be sent back to 1847 where it belongs and declaring brought in to perform verb service. My father fed me Shakespeare, Austen and Charlotte Bronte (NOT Emily) when I was a small child. While I work hard to sound as though I belong in this century, every now and then I find myself writing connexion and Overusing Capitals. Given that he was also a lawyer and a hippie, I simply tell people I was raised by wolves.
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Thanks, that's great. Two of the above seem to be problems with the fact that my brain has been eaten by 16th and 19th century English. One of those I meant that way, but if it's stopping you I may need to reconsider punctuation, or italics,
If I italicise "know", do you think this will convey that Scorpius thinks he's rubbish at reading the people around him?
The other:
should be sent back to 1847 where it belongs and declaring brought in to perform verb service. My father fed me Shakespeare, Austen and Charlotte Bronte (NOT Emily) when I was a small child. While I work hard to sound as though I belong in this century, every now and then I find myself writing connexion and Overusing Capitals. Given that he was also a lawyer and a hippie, I simply tell people I was raised by wolves.