OMG, I LOVE this story! :) I've now read parts I & II and am really looking forward to the rest. I'm really enjoying the way you've taken Sansa's points and fleshed them out. I'm a little bit in love with Scorpius myself at this point. ;) And it's great to see the H/D flame still burning in the background (even if both of them seem blinded.)

There's one thing I'm curious about though. What exactly did Draco do in the Battle of Hogwarts in this world? I can't help but think it must be something different than in canon, right? I felt like I missed the part where Harry told Scorpius (though I'm going to go back and read part I again to see.)

Anyway, regardless, you've done a marvelous job with the characters. Thank you for such a lovely story!