You are doing such a good job on this, even if you wrote a 'part' for each fact, I don't think anyone would complain.

I do like Lester Biggs very much - one thing about fanfiction is how you can make an original character your own like that. The entire political discussion was awesome.

I'm really interested in the backstory of HxD, too, especially after what happened in the hospital while Scorpius was there! Great job (I'm forwarding a copy to my sister - she appreciates well written stories, and I know she will love yours).