Well, that's why it lives on in brackets! But yes, I if feel bad about changing it; yet still felt that it needed something a tad more descriptive. I have the next four chapters of this somewhere between note form and fully written snippets, so I will get onto them asap. There's action, adventure, and Narcissa Malfoy making stupid choices. With you soon!
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Date: 2007-10-17 02:21 am (UTC)