HAHA~ It's okay! I reread the story, and it became clearer. It was the part where you were talking about the invention of the Unwired that got me slightly confused. :/

I really like your story, the idea is really new and very original. I love it.

I read the entire thing yesterday, and I was glad I did. You are fantastic in creating the characters! Very very good!

Thanks for sharing this wonderful fiction of yours. :)