http://celerywench.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] celerywench.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] blamebrampton 2009-11-17 11:28 pm (UTC)

♥ absolutely heartbreaking, yet so very beautiful.
I love that you interspersed their school days with their "now" days. I love those little moments they had together, happy and in love, those moments that looking back on made Sirius doubt Remus, the little hints that Peter would be the one to betray them that they didn't notice because in truth he wasn't really ever one of them. I love the idea that there were only 4 of them in the dorm (some stories have random others) but I think that makes perfect sense that peter simply existed within their midst - sorta like how you expect to have a chair in the room and don't really notice it until it's not there (or in this case goes off and betrays you).

♥ ♥ ♥
of course this retelling makes me wonder what happened when sirius was told to "lie low" at remus' - did they ever repair what was broken between them, could they ever truly trust each other again; do they just become friends?

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