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2007-10-13 06:46 pm (UTC)
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Totally charming and wonderful! Thank you very much, for two chapters instead of one too :)
Oonagh Quigley is my new favourite OC :)
Errors caught:
4a
He return's Ryan's computer -- returns
that he is seeing the only man Harry Potter has ever caused to die -- what about Quirrel?
4b
Honestly, James, if Rose didn't have the biggest smile I've ever seen on her face, I'd tell her what a bad person you are[.]" -- period
"She thinks its wonderful." -- it's
Soon they are at the Potters -- Potters'
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Oonagh Quigley is my new favourite OC :)
Errors caught:
4a
He return's Ryan's computer -- returns
that he is seeing the only man Harry Potter has ever caused to die -- what about Quirrel?
4b
Honestly, James, if Rose didn't have the biggest smile I've ever seen on her face, I'd tell her what a bad person you are[.]" -- period
"She thinks its wonderful." -- it's
Soon they are at the Potters -- Potters'