I love it! I've been reading this since it first started, and I love the way you've incorporated everything. Especially the scene at the end. A ghostly head with glasses peers through the wall and asks: "Can I come back in, yet?" An equally spectral hand, wearing a finely made sleeve, reaches through the wall and pulls Myrtle back. Scorpius is sure that he knows the voice that whispers "Sshhhh." I get that the first one is Myrtle, but is the second Rowena's daughter, or did I miss another ghost somewhere?
WOW!
Date: 2007-10-13 06:12 am (UTC)I get that the first one is Myrtle, but is the second Rowena's daughter, or did I miss another ghost somewhere?